Sunday, 28 July 2013

Our Fabulous Holiday Stories. We have been trying different sentence starters and using adjectives to make our stories interesting.

I fastened my boots.  I buckled my boots and slipped into my skis.  
I got better and better.  
I had a smile on my face from ear to ear.
I smiled and smiled.
I was proud of myself.
I went on the chairlift.
Ania-Kanu

I fastened my seat belt.  The air hostess said "Please be seated"
I drove in my car to my Nana's  house.
Then we went to a house beside the beach.  
The sun shone in through my window.
Olive Seddon

I flew over my poles.  I went flying and fell over.
I went with my family.
The cold air flew past my face.
I had to wear a warm jacket and a woolly hat.
Ryan Coupe

Splash! I jumped into the water.
I was proud of myself because I learnt how to swim in the swimming ring.
In the swimming ring I kicked and kicked.
It was fun.
Marley Lahood

Hip, hip hooray!!!It was my birthday.
I loved it when my friends gave me a present.
Then I opened them.  I couldn't wait to open them.
I ripped the paper off the present.
I loved when I saw the presents.
Saria Halabi

"Mmmmmm". The cookies are cooking in the oven.
  I can smell the chocolate melting.
I am stirring the mixture to mix it up.
I am eating a cookie.
It crunches in my mouth.
Ayla


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