Sunday, 23 November 2014

Motorbike Writing

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Vroom! Vroom! The bikes were a blur as they rocketed straight by.  They zipped, zoomed and revved their engines and whizzed along the school.  They wore a helmet, gloves and a jersey.  They came to say ‘Not to bully’.
Jem
Vroom! Vroom! The noisy motorbikes revved their engines as they zoomed past. Leather jackets flapping in the wind.  It was exciting.  A fluffy white dog peeped out of a pocket. A shiver ran up my spine.  My friends and I yelled with excitement as they passed.  They told us not to bully.
They left with a zip, zap, zoom! It had been amazing.

Ruby
Grey blurry smoke fired out of the engine as they shot like a missile across the grounds.  They also had smoke that filled the air.  The message was to not bully people that didn’t do it to you.  They wore special hard suits.
Magnus
Vroom! Vroom! They raced past us.  They grumbled with terror. They shot like a bullet across the ground. They trembled with fear. The motorbikes were loud. They went around the pods. They were awesome.
Dominic

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