Tuesday, 2 September 2014

Fabulous Writing


                      

The Sea

The angry waves crash against the cliff.  The seagulls are circling the light house.  Seaweed wiggled in the water. I smelt the salty air drifting through the air.  The frantic foam stuck to the rocks.
Ruby

The Sea
The waves crashed down under the jetty.  The seagulls circled around in the fresh air. the fish scampered away through the seaweed.  The waves crashed like a knife cutting the rocks.
Magnus

The Sea

Seals slap their flippers.  I hear the seals splashing down in the salty water. The waves splash on the shore.  I feed the seagulls when the seagulls are searching for food.  Squawk! Squawk! go the seagulls swooping across the sky.
Siena

The Sea

Waves splish and splash.  Seagulls flip and flap. Boats bob up and down.  The golden sand disappears under my feet, leaving only footprints.  I smell the salty air.  The seagulls are noisy and frantically flapping their wings.
Margot

The Sea

The waves are introducing waves.  The waves sprout up into the sky.  Seagulls squawk.  The seagulls pecked in the sand like a robot searching for food.
Teddy

The Sea

The rolling waves swished around in the sea.  A flock of seagulls flew out to sea.
George SR

The Sea

The waves curl up like a person in a blanket.  A flock of seagulls squawked around in the sky.  The fish scampered away from the shark.
Kade

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