Wednesday, 20 August 2014

Writing in Room 5

Yesterday Room 5 used this forest photo as writing motivation. We discussed and visualised what we could see, what we could here and what we would be doing here.


Here are some of the finished examples.

I can see a gushing waterfall and I can hear birds tweeting.
I am camping on the green moss. It is peaceful.
Mila.

I can see a blue waterfall and water with mud in it. 
I can hear birds chirping loudly in my ears.
The wind is blowing, making me cold.
Eilish

I am in a forest. I am going to investigate.
I am going to investigate the trees.
I got here by boat with my friends.
Tommy

I can see a waterfall rushing over the rocks.
It is loud.
I can hear the birds singing.
Copoer

I can see the big waterfall.
It is so big.
All I hear is chirping.
Cory

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