Tuesday, 17 June 2014

Amazing Descriptions of a Haunted House.

The Haunted House
I saw a freaky house. It had a big crack. The lightning crashed around the house. The house was broken up the top. It looked rusty when I saw it. Crash! Went the lightning. The house tumbled down in a second. The house was broken in a flash. The windows are rumbling. The doors are shaking and the doors are rattling around the knob. The rays of light are shining through the shattered windows. The dust is raised over the window sill.  The dust got thicker and thicker on window panes. I heard creaking coming from the top of the stairs that has cobwebs dangling from it.

Magnus Pinfold
The Haunted House
Crunch! Crack! went the house. The windows were cracked. The door was scratched and no body went in there again. The clouds blustered and it was windy. Thunder blew bricks off the house. The roof was covered with cobwebs and oil. The gate was in smithereens and a brick was too. The floorboards were rickety and covered with dust. The rays of light were shining through the shattered glass.

Jem Pendlebury

The Haunted House
I see a haunted house in the trees. At night there is lightning smashing on the roof. It looks scary to me. In a world that no one has seen. The pipe is getting damaged. There is water leaking. The clouds are dark and gloomy. The door is opening and closing so it gets scarier and freaky. There were vines swinging on the trees. The house stands quietly. The window panes were laid in dust. The spiders are making webs, it makes me tremble with fear. The gate is fastened with an old rusty chain.
Kade Lawrie

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