Tuesday, 13 May 2014
Popcorn Writing
Pop! Pop! Pop! goes the popcorn. I can hear munch, munch,munch. It was jumping like mad and it is dancing around the popcorn machine. It was going around and around and around like a washing machine.
Teddy
Pop! went the popcorn. It is flicking out of the machine. Everyone is crowding around it and steering at it. The popcorn was exploding like a volcano.
Magnus
Pop! Pop! Pop! The popcorn is popping out of the popcorn machine. Everyone is getting excited. We got some of the yummy popcorn. I loved it. Yum ,yum, yum. It smelt like warm butter. My tummy was rumbling waiting for it to pop.
Ruby
The popcorn is pop, pop, popping out of the machine. The popcorn is yummy. We were waiting patiently for it to pop. Suddenly the popcorn went Pop! Bang! Crash! Boom! It was dancing around the bowl.
Charlie
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