Ho! Ho!Ho! Santa Claus slips down the slippery chimney. The reindeer dashed along in the dark, black night. He slips through the window. He slips through the chimney. he sneaks through the night sky. Wind blows around them. swish, swish, swish. Sneaking into his cosy little home, he falls straight asleep on a red woolly couch. Exhausted from dropping off the bright, glowing, spotty, pink and blue presents on the white snowy ground. Dasher, Dancer, Prancer, Rudolph, Comet and all the others are just as tired as the rest.
By Lola Ritchie
What an amazing piece of writing for a Year 1 student.
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